❧ we would like to request the following revisions. Thank you for your application to the game! In order to fully process your application, our app team has requested the following revisions:
Please write an introspective sample of your character's arrivalin Asgard. While we feel you have a decently strong grasp of the character's overall personality, we would like to see a deeper analysis of Poe's motivations and how you intend to play him within the game setting. In your TDM sample, he states that he spoke to each of the gods before choosing one: why? What information was he seeking? What conclusion did he draw? What was his reaction to being told he could not return to his galaxy? These are the types of questions about your character's driving motivations we'd like you to explore in your revision. Please be sure to give your new sample a secondary review for any potential grammatical errors as well.
❧ what to do next. Please respond to this comment with your revisions. You have 72 hours to turn in your revisions; otherwise your application will be rejected and you can try again in next month's app round. If you have any questions about your revisions request, feel free to respond to this comment or contact the mods for clarification. We look forward to reading your revisions soon!
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❧ we would like to request the following revisions.
Thank you for your application to the game! In order to fully process your application, our app team has requested the following revisions:
❧ what to do next.
Please respond to this comment with your revisions. You have 72 hours to turn in your revisions; otherwise your application will be rejected and you can try again in next month's app round. If you have any questions about your revisions request, feel free to respond to this comment or contact the mods for clarification. We look forward to reading your revisions soon!
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