asgardmods: (PIA ❧ presque-vu)
ᴀsɢᴀʀᴅ ɢᴇɴᴇsɪs ❧ mod account ([personal profile] asgardmods) wrote 2020-05-24 11:01 pm (UTC)

Hello, and sorry for the late reply!

We think we have a picture of what you want your spells to look like based on the prose, but there is a problem with the first spell. Blood magic and magic that involves punishing the wielder isn't something that the gods give to Wanderers; magic should be a gift, and any sort of fatigue or wear on the Wanderer is due to their mortal form, not as a part of the spell itself. You can rework this spell so that isn't present if you would like!

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